Wednesday 2 November 2011

Rough Cut Feedback

1. Goodwin
The visuals match the music because the music is creepy and surreal. The visuals feature halloween masks so its good. 
2. Editing
Good use of editing of the lighting. Editing pace is also good and fits with the music. Good use of fades with the gas mask scene. On the end when the masks on the floor we think it should be shot with darker lighting. 
3. Camera Work
Could use a range of shots. It was mostly close up/mid shots. P.OV. shots were really good. Very creepy. Some shaky shots. 
4. Mise-en-scene
Masks add to the mystery of the song. Could vary the location to make it more interesting. Good use of the dark clothing which contrasts with the masks. 
5. Creativity and Performance
Very unique and creative, use of masks and use of masks and use of reds on artists mask. Appeals to target audience as it's mysterious. Lip-synching very well done, believable performance. Could do with more narrative - a little confusing at times. 

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